Wednesday, June 13, 2012

My ending for Licked

This just wasn't working Dad was too good. I decided to let out my secret weapon, the fly buzzed horrendously as it flew freely around the room. Dad couldn't take it anymore he had to kill the fly he danced around the room with a fly swatter in his hand. The fly buzzed around mr Spinks SMACK! Mr Spinks quietly gets up, grabs his coat and heads out the door.
I notice that there`s a big fly swatter mark on the back of his head. I started laughing.

6 comments:

  1. Awesome Jake!
    I like the idea of the flies.
    Will you put your video on?

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  2. Great Jake
    What is your favourite author?
    Also will you put the video on?

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    1. My favorite author would be Paul Jennings and V.M Jones. And I think I might edit the video first.

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  3. Wow Jake.
    This is a great ending for licked.
    What made you write that ending?

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    1. Thanks, I just tried to write how Paul Jennings would.

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  4. I love your ending It's awesome.

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